五 、阅读下面材料,根据要求写一篇不少于800字的文章。
5、 Read the following materials and write an article of no less than 800 words according to the requirements.
曾子曰:“士不可以不弘毅,任重而道远。” (《论语·泰伯》)
Confucius said, "A scholar must be resolute and resolute, with a heavy responsibility and a long way to go." (The Analects of Confucius, Taibo)
一则寓言说:每个人生而背负大木头前行。但总有人会觉得行路背负大木头太沉太辛苦,就不断将大木头削减至更短更小,行路也更轻松。直到有一天,遇到了凭自身力量无法跨越的沟壑,那些一如既往负大木头前行的人将大木头搭在沟壑上而有了桥,从而继续前行;而停在原地垂头丧气、追悔莫及的,正是之前那些不断削减大木头以致无法搭桥的人。
A fable says: Every person is born carrying a big piece of wood to move forward. But there are always people who feel that carrying large logs on the road is too heavy and difficult, so they keep cutting them down to shorter and smaller lengths, making the journey easier. Until one day, they encountered a ravine that they couldn't cross on their own, and those who had been carrying heavy logs as usual built bridges over the ravine and continued to move forward; And those who stood still, dejected and regretful, were the ones who had been constantly cutting down large pieces of wood to the point where they couldn't build a bridge.
读了上面两则材料,你有怎样的感触与思考?针对负重和减重、前行和止步等谈谈自己的看法,确定立意,写一篇文章。
What are your thoughts and feelings after reading the two materials above? Share your thoughts on weight-bearing and weight loss, moving forward and stopping, etc., determine your intention, and write an article.
要求:选好角度,明确文体,自拟标题;不要套作不得抄袭;不少于800字。
Requirement: Choose a good angle, clarify the style, and draft the title on your own; Do not copy or plagiarize; Not less than 800 words.
【范文参考】:
[Sample reference]:
负重前行,方得始终
Only by carrying heavy loads can we always move forward
人一出生,身上便有了无形的“大木头”,人们背着大木头前行却各有各的选择:有人选择抛弃;有人为轻松些选择将大木头越削越短;有人则默默无闻,始终负重前行。然而材料告诉我们,只有负重者才可以凭自身力量跨越沟壑。
As soon as a person is born, they have an invisible "big wood" on their body. People carry the big wood on their backs and move forward with their own choices: some choose to abandon it; Some people choose to make the big wood shorter and shorter for the sake of relaxation; Some people remain unknown, always carrying heavy burdens and moving forward. However, the material tells us that only the weight-bearing person can cross the ravine with their own strength.
其实这所谓的“大木头”,就是我们身上沉甸甸的责任啊!一个人始终将责任放在心上,不断砥砺行进,充实自己,提高自己的能力,遇到困难时,便会用自己超出旁人的能力化解。其他人嫌弃这责任太沉重,便不断地降低对自己的要求,遇到问题时自然只能低头叹息。
In fact, this so-called 'big piece of wood' is the heavy responsibility we bear! A person always keeps responsibility in their heart, constantly hones themselves, enriches themselves, and improves their abilities. When faced with difficulties, they will use their own abilities beyond those of others to resolve them. Others feel that this responsibility is too heavy, so they constantly lower their expectations of themselves, and when they encounter problems, they can only bow their heads and sigh.
曾参言:“士不可不弘毅,任重而道远”。肩负这“任重”方能达到先贤指明的“道远”,压在身上的大木头就仿佛是无形的生活压力,不断地压迫自己,有的人不堪重负,倒下,却没能再站起来;有的人选择忽视逃避,做了一个只会放弃自己的人;能承受住压力并勇敢前行的人是胜者,是令人敬佩的。虽然负重和减重前行的人在前期并没有差别,但到最后,胜利的人是负重者。
Zeng Canyan once said, "A scholar must be resolute and resolute, with a heavy responsibility and a long way to go. Shouldering this' heavy responsibility 'is the only way to reach the' far road 'pointed out by the sages. The large wooden burden on one's body is like an invisible pressure of life, constantly oppressing oneself. Some people are overwhelmed and collapse, but cannot stand up again; Some people choose to ignore avoidance and become someone who only gives up on themselves; The person who can withstand pressure and move forward bravely is a winner and admirable. Although there is no difference between those who carry weight and those who lose weight in the early stages, in the end, the victorious person is the one who carries weight.
日本颓废派作家太宰治在其作品《人间失格》中写道:“生而为人,我很遗憾。”为什么要遗憾?太宰治的遗憾,是在认清了人之本性和社会现实中的虚假、黑暗与冷淡之后的遗憾,他多次自杀未遂,最终还是自己结束了自己的生命,这也许就是不堪重负,最终只想减重的例子吧。认识到现实残酷的人不止他一个,为什么他不堪重负而死了呢?既认识到社会的黑暗,为什么不勇敢承担起自己的重担,而以一死减重呢?对此,对人各有言,我却不置可否。
Japanese decadent writer Osamu Dazai wrote in his work "The Disgrace of the Human World": "As a human being, I am very regretful." Why regret? The regret of Dazai Zhi is the regret after recognizing the falsehood, darkness, and coldness of human nature and social reality. He attempted suicide multiple times, but ultimately ended his own life. This may be an example of being overwhelmed and only wanting to lose weight in the end. He is not the only one who realizes the cruelty of reality, why did he succumb to the burden and die? Having recognized the darkness of society, why not bravely take on one's own burden and sacrifice one's life to lose weight? Everyone has their own opinions on this, but I remain noncommittal.
勾践遭受亡国之痛,却能卧薪尝胆;司马迁遭受宫刑,却忍辱负重完成《史记》;古代女将花木兰,迫于家庭“阿爷无大儿,木兰无长兄”的情况,承担起替父从军的责任,以区区女儿身竟混迹军队中12年,还成为了将军;宋濂担起求学的责任,手冻僵也要继续,一日三餐,只吃两餐,且无鲜肥滋味之享,缊袍敝衣,无慕艳意;司马光家穷,点不起油灯,便凿壁偷光;马丁·路德·金多次受到死亡威胁,几乎在监狱度过半生,却仍然初心不改;海伦·凯勒盲聋哑,却以自己坚强的意志书写了自己的人生华章。这些人中,哪一个不是忍辱负重,哪一个不是负重前行,这些人有谁是一帆风顺的度过人生呢?
Goujian suffered the pain of the downfall of his country, but was able to endure the hardships of hardship; Sima Qian suffered from palace torture, but endured humiliation and completed the "Records of the Grand Historian"; In ancient times, the female general Mulan, under the pressure of her family's situation of "grandfather without eldest son, Mulan without elder brother", took on the responsibility of joining the army for her father. As a mere daughter, she even spent 12 years in the army and became a general; Song Lian took on the responsibility of studying, even though his hands were frozen, he had to continue. He only ate two meals a day, without the enjoyment of fresh and fat flavors. He wore plain clothes and had no desire for romance; Sima Guang's family was poor and couldn't afford to light oil lamps, so he chiseled through the wall to steal light; Martin Luther King Jr. was repeatedly threatened with death and spent almost half his life in prison, yet he remained true to his original intention; Helen Keller was blind and deaf, but she wrote her own chapter in life with her strong will. Among these people, which one is not enduring humiliation and carrying heavy burdens, and which one is not carrying heavy burdens and moving forward? Who among these people has a smooth sailing life?
负重前行是给自己施加一种无形的压力,是激励自己继续努力,是一种期望,也是一种信仰。不忘初心,负重前行,方得始终。
Carrying heavy loads forward is an intangible pressure applied to oneself, a motivation to continue striving, an expectation, and a belief. Never forget your original intention, move forward with a heavy burden, only then can you stay true.
【解析】
【 Analysis 】
【详解】本题考查学生写作的能力。
This question tests students' writing ability.
审题:
Title:
这是一道任务驱动型材料作文题。
This is a task driven material essay topic.
本题材料由两则组成,一则直接说理,出自传统儒家经典《论语》,一则借助寓言形象说理,两则材料有同有异。第一则材料,“士不可以不弘毅,任重而道远”的意思是,读书人不可以不志向远大意志坚强,因为责任重大而且道路遥远。联系现实思考,个人前途与国家民族命运是紧密交织在一起的,青年学子应牢记自己的使命,勇于担当,勇于奋斗。第二则材料中的“每个人生而背负大木头前行”紧承第一则材料,告诉我们:奋斗的过程是艰难的,负重前行步履维艰。因而有人不断将背负的大木头“削减至更短更小”,以获得暂时的轻松,可一旦遇到凭借自身力量无法跨越的沟壑,便被拦下、不能再继续前行。背负的“大木头”象征着前进路上的种种磨难,也象征着自身的种种责任和使命,而这些正是前行路上必须肩负的重量,对其不放弃、不抛弃,在未来的某一天它们有可能成为我们前进路上重要的助力。综合两则材料可知,二者都强调了“担当”“奋斗”,这就是立意的方向。
The material for this question consists of two parts: one directly explains the reasoning from the traditional Confucian classic "The Analects", and the other uses allegorical imagery to explain the reasoning. The two materials have similarities and differences. The first material, 'A scholar must be resolute and resolute, with a heavy responsibility and a long way to go,' means that a scholar must have lofty aspirations and strong will, because the responsibility is heavy and the road is far away. Considering the reality, personal future and the destiny of the country and nation are closely intertwined. Young students should bear in mind their mission, be brave in taking on responsibilities, and be brave in striving. The phrase 'Everyone is born to carry a big piece of wood and move forward' in the second material closely follows the first material, telling us that the process of struggle is difficult, and moving forward with a heavy burden is arduous. Therefore, some people constantly reduce the large wooden burden they carry to a shorter and smaller size in order to gain temporary relief, but once they encounter a ravine that they cannot cross with their own strength, they are stopped and cannot continue to move forward. The "big wood" carried symbolizes various hardships on the road ahead, as well as various responsibilities and missions of oneself. These are the weights that must be shouldered on the road ahead, and we must not give up or abandon them. One day in the future, they may become important support for us on the road ahead. Based on the two materials, it can be seen that both emphasize "responsibility" and "struggle", which is the direction of the intention.
第二部分给出的是任务和要求。“读了上面两则材料,你有怎样的感触与思考”,意味着审题时必须综合考虑两则材料,不可只择其一;“针对负重和减重、前行和止步等”,即要求考生对两组示范性的词有所辨析,可以是具体的语句体现,也可以是行文思路中的体现。行文时可从材料入手提出自己的观点,然后进行论证,论证过程中注意结合古今的典型事例及思想理论。可以分析为何需要负重前行,因懈怠而减轻重量会有什么后果,如何更好地克服前行中的困难,担起该担的责任。可以联系现实批评那些“躺平”者,“摆烂”者,从而号召广大青年践行曾子的格言,为托举中国梦贡献自己的力量。
The second part provides tasks and requirements. What are your thoughts and feelings after reading the two materials above? "Means that when reviewing the topic, you must consider both materials comprehensively and not just choose one; Regarding weight-bearing and weight loss, moving forward and stopping, etc., candidates are required to distinguish between two sets of demonstrative words, which can be reflected in specific sentences or in writing ideas. When writing, one can start from the materials and put forward their own viewpoints, and then conduct arguments, paying attention to combining typical examples and ideological theories from ancient and modern times during the argumentation process. Can analyze why it is necessary to carry heavy loads forward, what are the consequences of reducing weight due to laziness, and how to better overcome difficulties in moving forward and take on the responsibilities that should be taken. We can criticize those who are "lying flat" and "slacking off" in light of reality, and call on young people to practice Zengzi's motto and contribute their own strength to the promotion of the Chinese Dream.
最后注意发言稿的格式。
Finally, pay attention to the format of the speech.
立意:
conception:
1.负重奋斗使生命更精彩。
1. Carrying heavy burdens and striving make life more exciting.
2.青年人当担负使命,负重奋进。
Young people should shoulder their mission and strive forward with heavy burdens.
3.减重获得一时轻松,却行而不远,负重前行终致远。
3. Losing weight may be easy for a while, but it won't go far. Carrying heavy loads will eventually lead to success.